When I first started the semester in this class, I was nervous of how I would do because our very first project was a little intimidating since the process was new to me. After going through the process a few times and becoming familiar with it, it became a little easier with each project. I […]
Feedback: The things usually said about my projects are to make my narrative/concept more clear to read. Students also noted that my color choices were interpreted differently. My original plan was to use bright and vibrant colors on the outside, and dark eerie colors on the inside. I did not have the amount of paint […]
Feedback: The students who looked over my ideations noted that they liked the comic strip idea best. Although, I did like the comic strip idea(and felt safe doing that), I wanted to push myself and do something 3D, since I have never done a 3D project in 1020. By the end of our discussion, my […]
Critique Notes: The people who wrote about my piece noted that the eyes were the most intriguing part of the composition. They also noted that the colors I chose worked well for the piece. They noted that there was a good even contrast throughout the piece. For improvement, they suggested possibly changing the color of […]
Feedback: For my ideations, a lot of people were responding to the two images of the women’s faces with the text. They noted that the text paired alongside the image of the women’s eyes was very powerful and effective and got my point across the most effectively.
Feedback: It was noted that for continuing this project, I needed to narrow down my statement and be specific about what my statement is aiming towards. I was told to decide if I wanted to focus on confidence, emotions, self-esteem, body image etc. Basically my feedback was to just narrow down what idea I wanted […]
Critique Notes: For this project, I received feedback that the colors I chose for each photo were not connecting with the writing that was paired with each of them. They also noted that the colors just did not connect to my research question in general. It was also noted that my photos did not work […]
Critique Notes: The notes I received on this project were few, but helpful. I noted that the idea of her emotionally struggling could be pushed further. Show more distress in the face or even in the objects around her. I also noted to work on the water part of the composition. Tweak it so it […]